Wednesday, December 21, 2016

WRITERS, T'IS THE SEASON



When I was teaching English Composition at the University of Massachusetts Dartmouth, I adapted "The Twelve Days of Christmas" and on the last day of classes cajoled my 18- and 19-year-old freshmen students into singing it. (As I recall, final grades might have entered into the discussion.) Despite some jagged interpretation of rhythm, we were unanimously impressive on the "NO MISSPELLED WORDS" line! ...and, yes, this is what we covered during the semester!

“ON THE LAST DAY OF CLASSES”
Tune: “The Twelve Days of Christmas”
(Adapted in the full spirit of a semester’s end by C. Lowrance)

Start of EACH verse:
INSTRUCTOR: On the last day of classes, my students gave to me…(On the first day of Christmas, my true love gave to me…)

End of EACH verse
ALL: A perfectly written essay! (a partridge in a pear tree)

STUDENTS: sing all verses, as follows:  

BRILLIANT Revision! (2 turtle doves) …in a perfectly written essay!!!  

CLARITY and Concision!! (3 French hens)  

GOOD Use of Example!!! (4 calling birds)  

NO MISSPELLED WORDS!! (5 gold rings)  

MARVELOUS Tone and Style!! (6 geese a-laying)  

FINE Process Analysis!! (7 swans a-swimming)  

GREAT Comp and Contrast!! (8 maids a-milking)  

STRONG Cause/Effect!! (9 ladies dancing)  

EFFECTIVE Organization!! (10 lords a-leaping) 

POWERFUL Style!! (11 pipers piping)


MEANINGFUL Content!! (12 drumers drumming)












































  



































Saturday, December 10, 2016

Guest post by artist Kathryn Kleekamp: A Fragile Cape Cod

I am delighted to provide readers an opportunity to savor the reflections and significant talent of Kathryn Kleekamp, a friend and artist whose work I greatly admire and whose values I respect. It is one thing to theoretically deplore the effect of coastal erosion, it is quite another to stand in its presence as a witness, as Kathy has done. I thank her for sharing.    


A Fragile Cape Cod
This time of year most of us enjoy fond thoughts of friendship and family. We treasure those   all-too-brief moments when we get together to celebrate with  loved ones, especially those who live far away.  We’re particularly thoughtful of  precious family members who may no longer be with us.
A recent early winter trip to the outer Cape’s Province Lands with a group of friends led to similar feelings. Instead of lamenting the loss of an individual however, I contemplated the loss of our beautiful coastline.
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Ray Wells Dune Shack  ~ Province Lands, Truro, MA

I rather imagine others who’ve witnessed this area’s erosion from storm winds and strong currents have similar thoughts. For a significant number of people, their simple shingled cottage which provided  a favorite family gathering place with barbeques on the porch and a beach where countless sunsets were admired, are now only memories.


When the nor’easter Juno, with 70 mile-an-hour winds, hit Cape Cod in January of 2015, the storm surge swallowed beaches and dunes from Sandwich to Truro. At Ballston Beach in Truro, the storm washed away dunes that had been rebuilt just the year before.  High tides and strong winds created an overwash causing water and sand to flow into the Upper Pamet River Valley covering the marsh and beach parking lot. The resulting breach in the dune was approximately two hundred feet wide.


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Dune erosion at Ballston Beach showing cut in the dunes.
Photo courtesy of Greg Berman, Woods Hole Sea Grant Program.


In the town of Sandwich where I live, Sandy Neck Beach is considered one of the “hotspots’ of erosion on the Cape. Damage from Juno resulted in more than a dozen beachfront homes being condemned. Wind-driven water dumped tons of sand that blocked Mill Creek, an important shellfish area and herring run connecting to Cape Cod Bay. Water intrusion also flooded sections of inland historic Route 6A, the Old King’s Highway.


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Painting “Sandy Neck Beach" 2008 Photo of same house 2015



Perhaps one of the most iconic Cape Cod  cottages claimed by the sea was Henry Beston’s Fo’c’sle, Initially built on the top of a 20-foot dune overlooking the Great Beach in Nauset it succumbed to a winter storm in 1978 after having been moved inland twice. Even the marker where the house last stood is now underwater.


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Painting “Outermost House”                    Outermost House being
(As it might have looked on original site) washed out to sea 1978


These are just a few dramatic examples of Cape Cod’s diminishing shoreline. Cape Cod towns make every reasonable attempt to rebuild beaches after major storms, but  it’s only a matter of time before natural influences again challenge our best efforts. Like the holiday gathering that is cherished for its brief moments of family togetherness, we should be mindful of the temporary nature of a shoreline constantly influenced by the dynamics of Nature’s forces. Cherish it and protect it.




Wednesday, November 16, 2016

NOVEMBER TOO *


 

WRITING LIFE




Do not dismiss November as a throw-away month, 

a collection of weeks that precedes and follows holidays

or you may miss the revelation that November is, in fact,

nature’s scrapbook filled with remembrance and recollection 

of this year nearly past.

 
Sunny summer days can come in November, days so warm  

we turn our faces, eyes shut, to the sky and bare our arms,

We cluck with surprise at lavender crocuses blooming again

amid thick blankets of russet leaves, we cock our heads to listen

to the beat of wings overhead as birds seek home (and often

think “but didn’t we just hear them arriving this spring?”)

We notice wintery black branches outlined against white clouds

hurrying across the sky with the urgency of a mother late for pickup.

 
Even the air is stunning, how can something invisible

be defined by qualities like strong or crisp or crystalline.

Frosty November mornings become balmy days,

then clear, cold, cobalt nights crowded with stars

and a restless moon that glides among them

with the solitary grace of a lone swan searching for its mate.

At day’s end black and coral skies sprawl unrestrained and joyous

as the work of a child left alone in an art room.

 
November dares us to name its rich, complex colors

and duplicate its elegant patterns effortlessly made

by weeds, vines, corners, shadows, and spiders.

The only adequate response to November’s

unrelenting beauty and art is this: shout praise

praise for streams and puddles and marshes

praise for maples and oaks and pines and cedars

praise for crunchy brown leaf piles

praise for shiny red wild rose hips

shout praise for gold everywhere.

 
Praise to you, little leaf spiraling confidently through the air,

lingering long moments between tree and ground,

obviously searching for the perfect landing place, well done!! 

 
And praise to you, November,

for your promises made

and honored each year:

Change is coming soon.

This glory will return.

And the world will be different

by then.


CHRISTIE LOWRANCE, NOVEMBER 2016
 

Note:   "November Too" is an elaboration on an earlier poem titled “This November” which was based on an earlier poem titled “November.” Apparently November resonates with me.  




Tuesday, November 1, 2016

WEALTH: A PERSPECTIVE




 







The Waquoit Bay National Estuarine Research Reserve's Fourth Annual Coastal Conference will be held Dec. 6 - 7 at the Hyannis Resort and Conference Center.  Writers and artists have been invited to submit work to be displayed, and the following is a short piece I contributed. I post it this particular week as a gentle contrast to the turmoil and vitriol of these days, as a reminder to stay focused on what is good and real in our lives.

                              

 It’s a short walk from my house to a saltwater beach, and I consider daily access to the sight, sound, smell, and feel of the sea a privilege and a luxury. About a month ago I was out for a walk with a friend at Town Neck Beach in Sandwich, Massachusetts. We stopped and stood looking out across the cold, glittering, blue-green December waters of Cape Cod Bay. A powder-blue sky sprawled above me and a few gulls hovered hopefully overhead.


A winter beach is the right time and place to watch the sea here, for you have no distracting thoughts of swimming or snorkeling or sailing or sunbathing when the air and water temperatures are both fairly near freezing. When you stand on a winter beach, the ocean’s majesty and immensity, its pure beauty, are unmarred. Without nearby parents fussing over towels and coolers or jet skis roaring past just offshore, you sense its innate power whether the waters are wind-whipped or placid.


I spotted something on the horizon, a dot that grew larger by the minute. We could see it was a container ship, probably out of Boston, heading for the Cape Cod Canal to our left. By the time we were able to see a red tugboat pulling the mammoth vessel, they both passed into the canal and out of sight.


Standing on this coastal shore on a winter day in the 21st century, imagination provides what progress has destroyed. In my mind’s eye the bay becomes crowded, as it once was, with wooden-hulled vessels and white sails, not metal, computer-run ships. This is the same historic bay that Pilgrims entered nearly five centuries ago, rejoicing with songs of praise to God for the very sight of land after their harrowing voyage across the Atlantic.


I rejoice in my nearness to the sea they braved, and count myself supremely wealthy for it.

Wednesday, October 19, 2016

ELECTIONS





It is four days after arthroscopic knee surgery, and my turtle-speed with a metal walker is steadily improving.  Pauli stopped by with a card and a bouquet of yellow and orange begonias from her garden, the lovely sort of thing neighbors do when one is incapacitated.

I suggest we go sit on my porch on this golden afternoon, a mid-October glory with gilded trees, a pale blue sky clear of clouds, and warm, light breezes that lift the leaves of the morning glories still blooming high on the stanchions. I thump over the wooden porch boards with the walker, drop heavily in one of the rocking chairs, and Pauli sits opposite me in a white wicker chair. We catch up on grandchildren, mutual friends, trips, and the price of pumpkins.


Carol from across the street walks over with groceries she has picked up for me. I invite her to join us, and we three old friends of 30 years sit together chatting on my porch. The conversation gets around to the 2016 presidential election just weeks away. With varying degrees of agreement, we bandy about the topics of gossip, accusation, and hard facts making the rounds on print, network and cable news.
 
But one remark stayed with me.

A commentator noted recently, Carol observed, that no matter who wins, the worst day is not going to be November 8, but November 9, the day after the election. Then the people who have reviled and loathed the opinions of friends, neighbors, families, colleagues, and peers will have to regroup, reconsider, and reconcile. “It will be like it was after the Civil War,” she said.

I thought about that later. My house was built around 1835, so it was 30 years old when the 1864 election determined who would lead the country at a terrible time when brother fought brother and state fought state, but with guns, cannons and swords, not newsfeeds and polls.
 
People may have sat on this same porch in the October sun that year, talking about the promises, opinions, health, and political record of Republican presidential candidate Abraham Lincoln, who vowed to bring the Civil War to a conclusion, and his Democratic opponent John B. McClellan who advocated a negotiated peace. But perhaps politics was a forbidden topic in this Sandwich house, for the mother of Louisa Gibbs who owned it then was a Southerner, and Louisa’s husband Charles Gibbs was an officer in the US Navy. 


Like today, the election in 1864 was uncharted territory. Kansas, Nevada and West Virginia had become states during that election period, so residents would be voting there for the first time. The Southern states of Alabama, Arkansas, Florida, Georgia, Louisiana, Mississippi, North Carolina, South Carolina, Tennessee, Texas and Virginia had seceded from and were at war with the Union; they did not participate in voting in the 1864 election. For the first time, soldiers in the field were allowed to cast a vote.
 
It was anticipated that Lincoln would lose the election. He was running for a second term, and the last nine presidents had all served only single terms. He supported Emancipation which was not universally popular in the northern states. However, the main issue for the country at the time was the war, and until General Sherman’s appalling “March from Atlanta to the Sea” in September, it was not going well for Union forces. Casualties that summer had been more than half those in the previous three years. In July Southern forces advanced to within miles of Washington and nearly captured the capitol; Lincoln himself watched the battle and had been shot at.
 
In mid-October 1864, then, perhaps people sat on my porch at 6 School Street discussing the divisive, polarizing and intensely personal issues of the election to come, as my friends and I did today with the approach of the election of 2016.

And if, 150 years ago, those same people grew weary of rehashing the qualifications/lack of qualifications of Lincoln and McClellan and the merit/lack of merit of abolition, states’ rights,  war, and negotiated peace, perhaps the conversation turned, as ours eventually did, to the fine fall day, the blue of the morning glories, and what was planned for dinner.
 
NOTE:  www.ushistory.org <http://www.ushistory.org/>  was a source of information for this post. To read a fascinating article on General Jubal Early’s attack on Washington, D.C., check out Smithsonian.com for the July 1988 article by Thomas A. Lewis.